Eye (Concrete Style haiku)

Eyes; the window to

Your soul, a bridge to your thoughts

Everyone can see

-Jacquelyn Routledge

A concrete poem has a message hidden in the first or last letters in every line. Can you find the secret message?

9 thoughts on “Eye (Concrete Style haiku)

  1. HAL

    i have a request , if possible. I have a sister turning 65 and she is very dear to me. I would like a short poem for her. can you help?


    1. Dearest sister, I must say,
      I adore you in every possible way.
      From your head to your toes,
      I know things about you no one else knows.
      On your birthday I give to you
      my whole heart, pure and true.

      (Hope she likes it!!)


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